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  1. Well done! The article was able to elaborate the event and was able to present the products well. Different colleges that collaborated with the event was also emphasized as they were not fully recognized during the event.

    The first product was the anti-human trafficking. I love how the writer advocates the victims of human trafficking because nowadays, it is widely spread. The next product was the unoy champorado. I also chose this product because of its uniqueness but the writer was able to expound it more. Lastly, the barako coffee. I love how the writers interviewed the sellers and she described how she was persuaded to buy the product because it was carefully chosen by the elderly.

    The choice of words was well-chosen and the products was well-described because you could feel how the writer exert effort in the project.

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